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مُساهمة من طرف boss الأربعاء يناير 20, 2010 7:33 pm

Hi Guys ....

Funny and Actions and adventure Story

This is My Story i take like 10 min to write
try same me to write story from you mind and remember ALL
PEOPLE CAN DO SOME WRONG AT WRITE , Just try
and try and try and try and try and try and try and try u will be genius
and never mind u are stupid in English , and try to make your brains work
in the right way !

Hassan And The Lion !

One Of Days at the night Hassan has been sanded by his father to
some Africa Jungle in the east of (Africa) , Hassan was scary about
the animals , was there lots of animals can ate him , but there was
in the same house that hassan has sleep in it other people was there
too was ( Old man and two children and Max he was same hassan years
old ) when he reached that home was time 12:11 in the night that family
was make a new room for Hassan to sleep in it , Easy room for few
days while make a good one to him because that was a poor family
and lonely House in the jungle , Hassan still scary about the animals ,
and he didn't accept to sleep in his room was wan't to sleep with the old
man ,hassan was Allegedly he don't wan't it to don't be selfish but .
in the first days in the jungle the Max has told Hassan to go with him
to see some animals near the house ,Hassan has accept Max invitation
to go with him to see animals .
While Hassan and Max give foods for the pets Max and Hassan listened
to Lion's roar Max and Hassan was scary affraid Max told Hassan to run but Hassan cannot moving when he scary , And he still can't move !!
he was tried to call Max to help him , but max was very scary and he get
away to him home , Hassan was thinking for way to get rid of the lion
Hassan has remember his daggers , Hassan get out his daggers and
trying to attack the lion and he completed Injured in the lions eye but the
lion didn't get away right now !! the lion has attack Hassan in his left hand
but Hassan reply replay the attacks in other eye of that lion , Woow
the lion get away to fixing his eye , Max has back with some help backup
from police of Africa with him Ambulance , then took Hassan to the hospital.

This is the end of my story Hassan and the lion
or maybe Hassan the lion !

T. Osama please Correct my story And send me the error (if there)
and send me the errors here or in short letter . early thanks

Write By the Boss

See u later with other story !
pirat
boss
boss

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مُساهمة من طرف osasa الأربعاء يناير 27, 2010 9:08 pm

Thanks for trying. I will send you the corrected version.

Keep up the good work
osasa
osasa
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